congratulations tpaine
it did basically the opposite for me though w/r/t words melding together, it seemed crisp, superficially, in the sense that it was 'engaging' or whatever. not good at critiques.
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that was a good read
yeah ken is legit good at this shit, the last several things he posted have all been nice reads
cheers dudes
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great, now not only do i think about deadken when having sex, but when i watch pornography as well. thanks a bunch u fucking brit.
nicely done.